Dreamweavers' Guildmistress
15 years ago
Dreamweavers' Guildmistress
Dreamscape Artist
I love 'Once Upon a Time' Hannai- it rather reminds me of what happens in New Moon. Keep writing: it's always a joy to read your work
Thanks Arwen! I see what you mean about the new moon reference, if that was so it would have to be from edwards perspective if Bella hadnt taken him back tho...
the block seems to be eroding slowly, im at the frustrating stage where theres stuff popping in and out of my brain but either incoherent, too fast to catch or unclear. Ever had a thought thats just a little too fuzzy to understand? like one more tiny piece of information and it will become clear..
anyways, this is something that popped in the other day, It came with a tune too, but my musical ability isnt enough to transpose what i can hear in my head to actual notes..
Cinderella/Fairytale
I never believed in fairytale endings;
You never hear what happens after the ball
Was Cinderella happy with Prince Charming
Or did they find it was lust in the end?
Did Snow White leave when she
Missed looking after her dwarves?
Or Sleeping Beauty
Return to her rest?
I never believed in fairytale endings
Couldn’t see happiness lasting so long
I never believed in fairy tale endings
And that’s why I know you’ll never come home
I never believed in fairytale endings
Could never see myself cast in that role
Living contented, happy ever after
Somehow such a future seems so wrong
Am I phobic, scared of commitment?
Maybe it’s something wrong in my head
Is it high standards, wanting perfection?
Why can’t I just learn to be content?
I never believed in fairytale endings
Couldn’t see happiness lasting so long
I never believed in fairy tale endings
And that’s why I know you’ll never come home
I never believed in fairy tale endings
Could never see myself cast in that role
Living contented, happy ever after
Somehow such a future seems so wrong
I never believed in fairytale endings
Couldn’t see happiness lasting so long
I never believed in fairy tale endings
And that’s why I know you’ll never come home
I never believed in fairytale endings
All the trials and the hardships then
Somehow impossibly the situation changes
Suddenly everything’s working out for the best
Is there something no-one has told me,
A giant secret that I’m not trusted with?
Does it randomy striking like lightning,
Or is it something everyone can get?
I never believed in fairytale endings
Couldn’t see happiness lasting so long
I never believed in fairy tale endings
And that’s why I know you’ll never come home
If you want your fairytale ending
You can wait for it to come
And if you need your fairytale ending
Can you try to take me along?
Suddenly I want that fairytale ending
To be dressed like a princess and go to the ball
And suddenly I need that Fairytale ending
I need to know there’s something more.
Wanderer Guilden
15 years ago
Tue Nov 03 2009, 01:46pm
Wanderer Guilden
Mage
Hannai, i love your work, its so beautifully writen and expressed, its so easy to read, one word just flows after the other.
Thanks Helena! writersmerge gives me so much encouragement to keep trying when im feeling blocked! and your sig cracks me up every time.
lol- I realsied today that ive been writing poetry for 11 years. It donst feel that long. I gave my mum a ringbinder with them all in- its full!
Wanderer Guilden
15 years ago
Mon Dec 22 2008, 06:53pm
Wanderer Guilden
Mage
glad to be of service ;)
wow! 11 yrs! bet that feels very strange :D
i hope you will keep writing for may yrs to come :)
Mystic Ward
15 years ago
Mystic Ward
Twentyfamilies Gypsy
WOOT Hannai, thats great. Congratulations.
Wanderer Guilden
15 years ago
Wanderer Guilden
Mage
cangratz! thats awsome!!! *hugs*
woo! Go you Hannai! I love your poems too.... I wish I could write poetry, but I'll stick to music producing :P
Thanks everyone! Maruman- i wish i was more musical! For Cinderella/fairytale i can imagine the music but i dont have the ability to reproduce it.
Ok this was written in the early hours of this morning and has basically no editing done to it.
Encounter
I once met a man
He said his name was Love
And that it would be best
If I were to heed his words
So I followed him
Around the world all day
And all night
Just to be near him
Eventually I grew tired
I had to stop to catch my breath
When I looked up Love was far ahead
On the misty horizon
I once met a man
He said his name was Folly
And that he knew a short cut
So I could catch up
So I followed him
Along a twisting turning way
Not far to go
He encouraged when I stumbled
Eventually I grew tired
The short cut seemed so long
When I looked up Folly was gone
I was lost and alone
I once met a man
He said his name was Truth
He picked me up
Setting me on my feet
So I followed him
Walking in his footprints
Soon we were walking
Down safe familiar ways I knew
Eventually I grew tired
There was so much I was learning
When I looked up Truth was waiting
Smiling he asked me
If I was ready to go on
05/01/09
Dreamweavers' Guildmistress
15 years ago
Dreamweavers' Guildmistress
Dreamscape Artist
Wow! That reminds me of one of the proverbs I have in a book of mine Hannai. It's really beautiful. Not something I think anyone could forget quickly. :)
I love the way you've described life experience's like that. You're poems are so beautiful!
thanks guys. It makes me happy to know other people like my poems.
All your poems are so...i don't know. but it's good! lol
I really like Lost and Winter
So its been a while. Ive been AWOL i know, but its not like i don't miss you guys!
Heres a little something i came up with totally spontaneously about 10 minutes ago. I dont know that it makes any sense per se..
Deluge
Lost and alone
I’m drowning and done for
Wherever I go
Clouds are following me
And I miss you
So sick of being left behind
And I know its
Not your intention
Not your plan
I’m just to slow to keep
Pace with the spinning world
To chase the sun
I hide here
Cocooned in artificial warmth
Searching for meaning
In the dark that surrounds me
Thunderheads closing in
Covering the earth
In violent storms
And life giving rain
Dreamweavers' Guildmistress
14 years ago
Dreamweavers' Guildmistress
Dreamscape Artist
I really enjoyed it Hannai- and I think I can relate to the subject matter a bit. ;D
Anna.
I saw you walking by today.
But I did not call your name;
It’s been five years since I saw you last
And I’m not ready to meet again.
Take my seat upon the bus,
My head a splitting pain.
I close my eyes and all I see
That empty look upon your face.
31/07/09
OMG I am in love with the poem "encounter" it is so beautiful and well structured and ahhh its gorgeous. i want remeber it and use it as my own personal reminder. its so awesome
thanks Miky. Im glad you like it.
Love that Hitchhikers Guide quote in your sig.
Ok, this ones a little odd. I was at a meeting and randomly wrote down lines that occured to me while i was listening to the speaker and writing notes to a friend... Then I altered and and re-arranged them a few days later, at 2:30 am.
So i dont really know what i think of this one yet, im not even sure it will make any kind of sense to anyone else.
ANY feedback will be much appreciated!
[ligne][/ligne]
Peace, Love and All That Jazz.
Communities lacking communication
Pale parody of reality
You can’t sign out of real life
Stagnancy achieves nothing
Action turns the world.
So live-
Turn the other cheek
Evidence of reality
Whispers in the dark
Drown out the message
Be a part of something special-
Listen to the words.
Be active,
Proactive.
Reactive.
Decide for yourself
Rise to the challenge-
Find peace.
Each step
A million paths are opened
Allows another divergence
Keep moving
The destination is not a place
Knowledge is nothing without application.
Dedication. Love.
That's really cool Hannai! It sounds like something you would hear a beat poet perform, like spokenword. It's different, in a great way!
Mystic Ward
14 years ago
Mystic Ward
Twentyfamilies Gypsy
I really like it Hannai. I love the addition of one line to each stanza and it totally makes sense. Maybe thats just my weird brain though :P.
thanks guys
i really wasnt sure, but it was late...
and Deb, an obernetter with a weird brain? you must be so unique...
i love ellipses.