Keeper of the Sherbet Lemons
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This is a thread for Kaylan R's poem... All poems below were written by Kaylan R
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Haunting.
When I look in the mirror I see
an opaque person looking back at me.
Who is this person staring into my eyes?
the one committing satanic crimes.
Do you want me to wither and die?
Or would you rather sit back and lie?
Is it the touriquet that draws me near?
The object that holds and loves me dear.
Who won't you let go and do not decieve?
berid of my pain and cease me to bleed.
End the dejection and detatch the deciet,
deduct the pain and forget the defeat.
Untitled
This time I wont fail
I'm following the wonders of the open trail.
Even though I'm opaque
I'll leaving the past behind and casting betrayal.
If I can fly,
just let me fly on my own.
If I can sing,
just let me sing on my own.
Jul 2, 2005, 8:58pm[/url], talisha[/url] wrote:its good.. you just need to check the phrasing/grammar
"I'll leaving the past behind and casting betrayal." ??[/quote]
Jul 3, 2005, 3:29pm[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:i have no idea.............all my poems just come to mind.[/quote]
Jul 5, 2005, 3:08am[/url], talisha[/url] wrote:Lol I meant the grammar, it doesn't make sense.
"I'm leaving the past"
or
"I'll leave the past..."[/quote]
Jul 5, 2005, 7:20pm[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:I'll leave the past does sound much better, but I wont change it, because I have this thing about changing my work.[/quote]
Taking Over
Will somebody take me over?
Won't somebody hold me down?
I cant believe you breathed
through the smoke and the fire and the clouded memories.
Is it the normal life you live?
I can't feel any laughter or love in that life of yours you lead.
I think you need taking over
I think you need to frown.
Just stop smiling and stop lying to yourself, because it's not funny any more.
Is this the way you want to be?
Why are you drownning in your own dreams? To me it seems so wrong. Just go back to where you belong.
Wont somebody take me over?
I think I need to frown.
I think you need taking over?
I think you need to frown.
Jesus' last thought.
by Kaylan Rage on Jun 23 (bookmark) (print) (next)
Author's Last Login: 7 hours ago
In Category: Weird.
One word can change the soul
As you nail me to the cross i understand how.
Is it the light that blinds me?
Or is it myself, wrapped in my own emotion?
What do you think you are doing?
as you tie my hands and feet.
Do you think I can't hear you whispering?
I can feel your breath as ice in this heat.
I'm tired of feeling so faithless and wrong
so let me go back where I belong.
One touch can make me numb
I find it in my heart to pull out the crow.
It's inside of me, enlarging it's wings as I grow.
Can you hear it calling its' sweet song of remedy?
What do you think you are doing?
as you rope death around my neck.
Don't you think I cant feel your soft pull?
the master of evil wants to take me home.
I hold in my last breathe as my wrists are torn
I am going back where I belong.
Jun 24, 2005, 8:43pm[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:I hope you like it......It is rather weird....so yeah.......[/quote]
Jul 2, 2005, 9:24pm[/url], shadowoutcast wrote:This not bad qwerky but not bad. Now for some history
As he was on the Cross
Jesus Prayed, "Father, forgive them; for they don't know what they're doing." Luke 23:34 MSG
His last words
By now it was noon. The whole earth became dark, the darkness lasted three hours - a total blackout. The Temple curain split right down the middle. Jesus called loudly, "Father, I place my life in your hands!" Then he breathed his last Luke 23:44 - 46
This is not to say anything I just felt like sharing this here for I was promted to. If you feel uncounfortable with it I'm sorry just sharing[/quote]
Jul 3, 2005, 3:32pm[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:It is only the title of the poem, I did not ever think of the exact last thought. It is actually just an expression.[/quote]
Jul 3, 2005, 5:31pm[/url], shadowoutcast wrote:I know I just felt like sharing... I like the poem I wasnt trying to correct anything it really good[/quote]
Jul 3, 2005, 10:35pm[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:well, thanxyou. That is allright.
your really good too.[/quote]
They - a poem
The nightmares they do shake my eyes
I peek through my fingers and say to you;'surprise!'
I can't explain what I feel
my disguise it changes all the rules.
Enter my new world.
Breathe my new air
thay really love you.
I keep my own self locked in my heart
It peels away my skin and my feelings they do part.
I want to entangle the vines
but my love for you is pulling all the binds.
Enter my world.
Breathe my new air
they really love you.
Seep into me, by my own imagination.
Cruel you are, to say to me that I lack inticipation.
Enter my own world.
Breathe my new air
I really love you.
Hope
by Kaylan Rage on Jun 23 (bookmark) (print) (next)
Author's Last Login: 8 hours ago
In Category: Hope. 1 views this week.
Hope
It's taken over me
like sweet loving remedy
like the painfull thoughts of yesterday.
Night
is flowing through me strong
like I don't belong
I swirl through misty remedies.
Let me feel
Let me fly
Let me wisdom into wonder
Let me lie.
Jun 26, 2005, 1:01pm[/url], Miky[/url] wrote:I like it alot![/quote]
Jun 27, 2005, 6:21pm[/url], Rushton[/url] wrote:Kaylan! that is so good [img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/cheesy.gif" alt=":D" border="0"/>
My poetry is always wretched and tragic [img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/tongue.gif" alt=":P" border="0"/>[/quote]
Jun 27, 2005, 6:31pm[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:Thanks Miky,
and Rigel........wretched and tragic poems are sometimes the best poems that you can write.[/quote]
Untitled
Lies they're taking over me
And I just can't believe
that the flower grew from the seed.
Can't you picture me
perfectly
why are you taking over me?
Why are you ruining me?
The sweet self you used to be
has gone away in a hurry.
Don't try to fix me I'm not broken,
I'm just lost in the waves of the sea
that are no more.
Cry, out in front of me
I want you to make me happy
your tears will soak up good memories.
Can't you picture me
perfectly
why are you taking over me?
Bring your nails and draw me near
The old love you brought has sunk
into the shadows.
Don't try to fix me I'm not broken,
It's you who has brought me down
and drowned me in the sea.
Now there is no more
no lies that you can see.
There's no love that you can bring
that can let the child within conceive.
Hero
One moment ago
my saviour
One moment ago
my hero in the night.
Why go to the dark?
my saviour
Why go to the dark?
my hero.
I feel you again,
In the night.
I feel you again,
through the wind.
I feel you again,
my life - you are.
I feel you again,
my hero.
cold
Blackness all the time
I can feel you in my mind
your following me.
Holding me straight down
I feel like I am drowning
your following me.
chorus -
your taking my life
and oh your taking my soul.
Your taking,everything I ever loved
and now - I'm cold.I'm cold.
Whenever I am swimming
I am concious of my breathing
your drowning me.
I try to pull away,
but you still seem to stay
just go away.
chorus -
your taking my life
and oh your taking my soul.
Your taking,everything I ever loved
and now - I'm cold,I'm cold.
Coda -
you promosed
that you would go away.
But I'm still drowning
yet,you still seem to stay.
Why cant you leave me alone?
just leave me alone.
Oh - your nothing different now
though you claim to love me back.
And oh - you promised
you promised.
Chorus -
your taking my life
and oh your taking my soul
Your taking,everything I ever loved
and now - I'm cold
I'm cold.
May 15, 2005, 1:48pm[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:is it any good?,if it is then tell me[/quote]
May 26, 2005, 9:49am[/url], Brownie[/url] wrote:It's awesome! I love it!
I was just trying to sing it out loud, but then Brydie looked at me wierdly and i had to stop, but really really really really rewally reall yrea [okay I'm gonna stop typing really now as they are agetting a bit messed up] GREAT!
Brownie[/quote]
May 28, 2005, 4:03pm[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:ohh...thank you sooo much!!!
I'm glad you like it!!
I have it on a few other sites,but I'm glad someone from Obere.net liked it!!!
*smiles*[/quote]
Jun 22, 2005, 3:55pm[/url], Never Undressing Sneer[/url] wrote:i liked it...
reminds me of something... *thinks*
meh cant remember...[/quote]
Jun 24, 2005, 8:36pm[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:*thinks*
It'll come to you soon[/quote]
Depth
I felt the air around me fall into the depths of my
reality.
I walk around where you cant see and feel for lost and broken memories.
I find the path that I have lost and start to mend the frayed pieces of the past.
The air it gave way and started breathing and swallowing me,
I know my life can't last.
I seem to find my life amoung the broken pieces of my shell.
They fold and now I am on the grond preparing to scream for help.
I feel the air around me fall into the depths of my reality.
Ok,just let me know if this is okidokies
Opaque Image
Have I been looking in the mirror for too long?
Is what I see my soul or is it something wrong?
Oh,I try to focus on the one true me,
But there's something further inside that makes me bleed.
Maybe I try too hard or don't try hard enough,to see
that there's just too many tears that keep blinding me.
When I cry I am emeshed in all my tears.
But I'm just too blind to see that they've been falling for too many years.
Oh,I whisper to myself that It's OK,
but now that's false and beginning to fade.
For I know the diffeerence,and have become so numb.
I'm too captivised and need saving from the nothing I've become.
May 14, 2005, 10:32pm[/url], HeartoftheDarkness[/url] wrote:Um, no offence, but werent they lyrics from Evanescence and Linkin Park?[/quote]
May 15, 2005, 11:41am[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:No,but it kinda rhymes with an Evanescence lyric.Just the first verse though,I had it in my head.
But Linkin Park???
I own all the linkin Park albums and I dont see a resemblence.
Maybe the numb bit[/quote]
Winter
I search in the dark to locate my breath.
Where am I?
I try to understand as to what happens next.
What will I do?
I hear the shattering of glass and look around me.
What was that noise?
I feel my cold whisper and close my blunt eyes.
Why am I like this?
I think about how cold I am.
Will I ever be warm again?
I hear a soft call and breathe deeply.
What do they want?
''Hey you.Listen to me!''
Why can I hear their calls?
Why do I dissobey them?
''Listen.fool!!''
Though I know why I do not understand.
I know why I do not listen to the advive.
For I am winter,cold and angry.
And I need your help.........
Do you like that???
Apr 14, 2005, 7:37pm[/url], Moonwatcher[/url] wrote:Great poem!
[img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/smiley.gif" alt=":)" border="0"/>[/quote]
Apr 22, 2005, 9:18pm[/url], Kaylan-R[/url] wrote:thanx!!![/quote]
system of the doubt.
System of the doubt.
Look.Hear us shout.
It's the bag full of words.
No one cares that it doesn't matter anymore.
System of the worthless.
Feel our pockets,
they are pennyless.
No one sees the change in us anymore.
Covered in our tears,
spread apon our wings.
Feel our pain through the bag full of words.
No one grows through their dreams anymore.
System of the doubt.
Hear us.Look,we shout.
It's the bag full of words.
No one cares that it doesn't matter anymore.
So,how was that?????
Tell me what you think,and by the way I'm glad you liked my pooem!!!!
Poem
Beauty comes from the sun.
A person who is ugly comes from the storms.
But alas,nobody is ugly...Clouds are just created by a figment of our imagination.