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Page 443 para 2 [Continuity]
Atthis had warned me that there would be a price to pay for saving Rushton, and I had agreed to pay it. I would pay it again
- Not strictly speaking an error, but it made me LOL. As long as Elspeth is paying with someone else's life she is happy to pay it again! Seems a bit callous :P
In an earlier section of text, Elspeth states that since the cord bound her to Rushton, it must lead her to him. This implies his presence where she ends up after following it.fall
Page 313 para 4 [Continuity]
Suddenly Rushton turned his head towards me
- Rushton has not been described as being in Elspeth's presence at this stage. Reuvan is mentioned in the previous paragraph
Aren't the Druid's people rebels? This makes sense to me.Page 94 para 3 [Continuity]
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instead of the hardened rebels they had expected
- In The Keeping Place, they were expecting the Druid's Armsmen
Sorry, but I think you've noted the wrong part here. In the first clause, the verb that gives tense is watched. In this case, Elspeth is saying, "I watched this happen, and then this other thing happened," which makes sense.fall
Page 94 para 4 [Grammar/Syntax]
I watched soldierguards nocking arrows and unsheathing swords and knives, and then horses arranged themselves as a living barrier.
- Inconsistent tenses
I think this one makes sense if you think of "on" as meaning "above" or "upon".fall
Page 242 para 3 [Grammar/Syntax]
when I had dived on the sunken parts of the city
- dived in?
I'm very happy to be corrected, but I think this one is the correct tense too. How about if you think of it as "It was better he past-tense-verbed than past-tense-verbed."?fall
Page 355 para 1 [Grammar/Syntax]
it was better he travelled to the Red Land than stayed behind
- Incorrect tense
I would say a blind person can glare as much as they can stare. :Pfall
Page 615 para 5 [Grammar/Syntax, Continuity]
He looked startled then he glared at me
- Missing comma
- Not sure about this one - can a blind person glare?
From some handy website that Google presented to me:fall
Page 667 para 1 [Grammar/Syntax]
a rhythm and pace that were easy to maintain
- Verb agreement
When the subject of a sentence is composed of two or more nouns or pronouns connected by and, use a plural verb.